diff --git a/apps/nesdoctor/src/ask.rs b/apps/nesdoctor/src/ask.rs
index 936c2fdb..7f845b9c 100644
--- a/apps/nesdoctor/src/ask.rs
+++ b/apps/nesdoctor/src/ask.rs
@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ pub fn run(ctx: &Ctx) -> Answers {
         println!(
             "\x1b[1mOne permission.\x1b[0m Steam keeps, on this disk, the size of each game you"
         );
-        println!("have installed and the time you last launched it. Reading it answers three");
+        println!("have installed and when you last played it. Reading it answers three");
         println!("things we would otherwise have to ask you badly: how big a library is, what");
         println!("shape it has, and what hours you actually play.");
         println!();
diff --git a/apps/nesdoctor/src/main.rs b/apps/nesdoctor/src/main.rs
index 94da1b53..5759e0ba 100644
--- a/apps/nesdoctor/src/main.rs
+++ b/apps/nesdoctor/src/main.rs
@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ struct Args {
     ///
     /// Relative to the working directory, which during development is a git
     /// checkout -- and this file contains the operator's own machine: home
-    /// paths, installed titles, launch times. It was committed to the public
+    /// paths, installed titles, when each was last played. It was committed to the public
     /// repository once by accident. `.gitignore` now covers the default name,
     /// and the default is deliberately not something like `report.json` that
     /// an ignore rule would miss.
@@ -299,15 +299,15 @@ fn main() {
             args.json.display()
         );
         println!(
-            "\x1b[2m    full latency series, and your installed titles with sizes and launch\x1b[0m"
+            "\x1b[2m    full latency series, and your installed titles with sizes and when\x1b[0m"
         );
         println!(
-            "\x1b[2m    times. It is more useful to us than anything above, because it is what\x1b[0m"
+            "\x1b[2m    each was last played. It is more useful to us than anything above,\x1b[0m"
         );
         println!(
-            "\x1b[2m    lets us size a real game library. Have a read and send it along if\x1b[0m"
+            "\x1b[2m    because it is what lets us size a real game library. Have a read and\x1b[0m"
         );
-        println!("\x1b[2m    nothing in there bothers you.\x1b[0m");
+        println!("\x1b[2m    send it along if nothing in there bothers you.\x1b[0m");
     }
 
     // The one thing we can never ask afterwards.
diff --git a/apps/nesdoctor/src/report.rs b/apps/nesdoctor/src/report.rs
index a329c8b2..42d13346 100644
--- a/apps/nesdoctor/src/report.rs
+++ b/apps/nesdoctor/src/report.rs
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ fn enc(s: &str) -> String {
 ///
 /// Carries more than the clipboard line does, because it is not something
 /// anyone has to eyeball in a chat window: every check individually, the full
-/// latency triple, the 24-hour launch histogram, and the five largest titles.
+/// latency triple, the 24-hour last-played histogram, and the five largest titles.
 pub fn submit_url(base: &str, f_: &Full) -> String {
     let (sys, host, net, steam, answers, verdict, region) = (
         f_.sys,